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Title: Looking For A Perfect Family
Pairings: YooSu, YunJae
Characters: YooChun, JunSu, ChanHee, InWhan, JaeJoong, YunHo, EeTeuk, KangIn, SiWon, HeeChul, HanKyung, ZhouMi, KyuHyun
Fandom: DBSK feat. Super Junior
Rating: PG
Genre: General, fluff (?)
Length: chaptered (Chapter 4)
Summary: Park YooChun, a single parent and a cold hearted CEO, had lived eight years with his son, ChanHee, already and his son's cries for an umma hadn't left him unnoticed since two years ago. How will he explain to his son that he didn't want to tie himself down with someone else? After all, he'd vowed to never step into another marriage again, when he knew it'll turn out unsuccessful. Will ChanHee just leave it at that decision or will he do something about it, to make his father change his mind?
Disclaimer: I don't own the characters!

Prologue, Chapter 1, Chapter 2Chapter 3 


ChanHee woke up early and got himself ready before going downstairs. He made a beeline towards the kitchen, nearly bumping onto a nearby porcelain vase.

"Well, good morning there, young master. You're up quite early this morning," a bright smiling cook greeted politely.
"Good morning, hyung," ChanHee greeted back before taking a minute to calm down. "Uhm... hyung... can you do something for me?,"

ChanHee tugged onto the cook's apron.

"Anything you want, young master," the cook smiled.
"Can you make extra pancakes for me?," ChanHee asked.

Confusion was written all over the cook's face.

"Yeah, extra... I want to bring some for my friend," ChanHee explained.
"Ok, I'll make extra for you and breakfast will be ready in a minute," the cook said.

ChanHee was about to walk away, but stopped in his tracks. He turned to look at his cook.

"Oh, is appa up already?," ChanHee asked.
"Yes, young master. He's in his study," the cook answered.
"Can you have our breakfast brought there?,"
"Of course, young master,"
"Thank you, hyung,"

With that, ChanHee made his way towards his appa's study on the first level. Once he was there, he knocked three times before entering the room.

"Good morning, appa," ChanHee greeted with a big smile.

YooChun looked up startled at his son's voice.

"Oh... morning, ChanHee. Did you have a good night's rest?," YooChun asked and stopped his writing for that moment so he could pay attention to his son.

"Not really, appa..."
"Why? What's wrong?," YooChun asked with a concerned voice before getting up from his swivel chair behind his mahogany desk.

He went over to ChanHee and knelt infront of the boy, taking ChanHee's little hands in his own big ones.

"What's wrong? You know you can tell appa," YooChun said.

ChanHee didn't answer immediately. It seemed as if he didn't know whether or not to tell his appa what's going on in his mind.

"Appa?," ChanHee started.
"Yes, Channie?,"
"Can... I go over to my friend's house?," ChanHee asked a little nervously.

YooChun blinked. Why was ChanHee nervous to ask something like this? It's not as if he'd get angry at the other for wanting to go see a friend.

"Only if you tell me which friend," YooChun said.

ChanHee looked at his appa with a big smile now. He jumped up to hug his appa tightly.

"His name is Kim InWhan! I told you before already, appa. He's my only friend in school. Can I really go to his house?," ChanHee asked hopefully.
"Do you promise to behave? I don't want to hear any complaints from his parents," YooChun said smiling.
"Of course, I'll behave!,"
"Then you can go. But, be back before 6,"
"Okay~! Thank you appa, I love you!," ChanHee cried out happily before hugging his appa again.
"I love you too, Channie,"

That morning, ChanHee had his breakfast with his appa together in the study. After their breakfast, ChanHee was dropped off at school by their personal driver. When the black car completely disappeared out of view, ChanHee heaved a sigh.

He bit his lower lip nervously. He wasn't sure if InWhan wanted to talk to him. ChanHee only hoped the other would forgive him, one way or another and accept his... apology and...



ChanHee's eyes looked at a certain person sitting under a tree, ready to have lunch. He wasn't sure what he should do. After what he and InWhan had seen at the wedding, ChanHee had seen how hurt InWhan had looked when his appa had dropped his friend's omma. ChanHee had wanted to apologize right at that moment, but he couldn't, because InWhan had already left his side to help his omma.

ChanHee took a deep breath and gathered all his courage before making his way over to the figure under the tree. He stopped a half metre away from the other and waited till the other noticed him.

One second passed.

Two seconds passed.

Three seconds passed.

Nothing happened.

ChanHee cleared his throat.

"Uhm... InWhan...," ChanHee finally managed to bring out.

The little one looked up at him. Their eyes locked for a second. Then InWhan looked away from ChanHee. It hurt. ChanHee pouted as he stood there awkwardly. It was still clear that InWhan was still angry at him. But... ChanHee didn't want the other to be angry at him anymore!

"Uhm... InWhan ah... I'm sorry... I really am...," ChanHee apologized carefully. "My appa didn't mean to hurt your omma like that... it's just...,"

"Then why did he do it?," InWhan finally opened his mouth for that morning.

InWhan had refused to say anything to ChanHee the moment he saw the other enter his classroom. In fact, InWhan had hoped not to see the other at all.

"I... I... actually don't... know... but... appa isn't someone like that!," ChanHee said in defence. "Well... except for mean people," he added as a second thought.

ChanHee looked everywhere, except at InWhan, as he rubbed the back of his neck nervously. He really wasn't a star in apologizing and making up with someone. He'd never gotten into a fight before with his previous friends in Japan. This was the first time he'd actually gotten into a fight with a friend. A really good friend to be exact.

"Omma isn't mean!," InWhan defended his omma immediately.

"I know! I know... your omma isn't mean. I know that. I'd kill to have such an omma like yours!," ChanHee said quickly and dropped on his knees in front of InWhan.

"I know appa is at fault, but... please, I don't want us to have a fight anymore and I don't want you to be angry at appa anymore. Please, don't be angry anymore? Please? Please forgive me and appa?," ChanHee pleaded with puppy eyes, his hands clasped together beneath his chin.

There was a minute silence as InWhan was thinking over the whole fight. Maybe the other was right. InWhan didn't want to fight with his hyung either, but could he really forgive the other for harming his omma? But, then again it wasn't his hyung's fault either, because his hyung didn't do anything to his omma. It was his hyung's appa who did that. Maybe... just maybe... there had been a fight between his omma and his hyung's appa...

"O... kay... I forgive you," InWhan finally said.

ChanHee's head shot up immediately with hope in his eyes.


InWhan nodded.

"Oh! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you, InWhan!,"

With that, ChanHee flung himself onto the other happily. This brought a soft chuckle from the little one. InWhan patted the other on the back lightly, before hugging the other.

They were on good terms again.

"Oh! I got you something too...,"

ChanHee pulled away from the other and dropped his bag, which he'd been carrying for a while, on the ground. He noticed InWhan's curious look and smiled to himself proudly. InWhan wasn't angry at him anymore. And he liked that. ChanHee pulled out a lunchbox and showed it to the other.

"For you and your omma... as... an apology. You don't mind, do you?," ChanHee gave the other a nervous look.

"Thank you, ChanHee hyung," Inwhan smiled as he took the offered lunchbox. "Let's have lunch together?


ChanHee couldn't have sounded any happier than he already was.


After school, ChanHee found himself walking alongside with InWhan and his friend's omma. He'd never thought that taking a walk from school to home (InWhan's home) could be so much fun. Hopefully he can have this repeated again. And who knows, maybe his appa can come along too.


"Yes, uncle JunSu?," ChanHee asked happily skipping along next to JunSu.

"Have you told your parents that you're going to my house today?," JunSu asked.

"Yes, I did. I asked appa already this morning," ChanHee answered brightly.

"O... kay... I just wanted to make sure your parents know where you are," JunSu said.

"Omma...," Inwhan started.

"Yes, InWhan?," JunSu asked.

"Why is there a black car following us? It's been going everywhere we are going for quite some time," InWhan pointed out to his right.

Both JunSu and ChanHee looked at where InWhan was pointing. And sure there was a black car on the street, but it was nothing out of the ordinary. It's like any cars on the street, right?


Both JunSu and InWhan blinked surprised at ChanHee, who suddenly let go of JunSu's hand. He made his way over to the black car quickly.

"ChanHee! Where are you going? Come back here!," JunSu shouted.

JunSu stood dumbfounded there as he watched the little kid talk to someone wearing all black in the black car. What was going on? Who was that man?

Before he could think of an answer, ChanHee was back at his side again, with a big smile plastered on his face.

"Let's go," ChanHee said as he tugged onto JunSu's hand, taking the other along with him.

"ChanHee... who was that?," JunSu asked sternly stopping the other from walking any further.

JunSu saw the surprised look on ChanHee's face and almost felt bad for startling the other. He didn't mean to sound like this, but if it was for the safety of the other, then he had to treat the kid just like how he treats his own son.

"Uhm... he is just a... person I know," ChanHee answered nervously.

JunSu waited for more explanation.

"Omma... what are you doing? You are scaring hyung," InWhan said as he pulled his omma's left hand.

"InWhan... hush now. Let me hear ChanHee out first," JunSu said and InWhan stilled immediately.

InWhan knew this tone. It was the same tone his omma always uses on him when he hadn't behaved like he should. He waited till his omma was finished then.

"Uhm...." ChanHee still didn't know what to say to this new side of InWhan's omma.

He had always pictured InWhan's omma as an angel who couldn't get angry at anyone. Never ever did he picture his friend's omma to be this... stern...

"ChanHee... you don't just go up to someone in a black car and talk to that person. It's dangerous to talk to someone in a car. Who knows what can happen to you," JunSu reprimanded.

"But, I said I know that person," ChanHee protested.


"Well...," Chanhee sighed.

He had hoped, from the beginning, not to give away his identity, but it seemed he had no choice but to do so now.

"He's my personal driver," ChanHee said.

"Personal driver?," JunSu blinked.

This was something new. JunSu had thought the other might come up with something else, like saying it was a 'cousin' or 'uncle' or anything else but 'personal driver'

"Well... appa is afraid that I might get hurt or something, so he sent my personal driver to keep an eye one me. But, he's gone now," ChanHee explained.

"Does that mean you are really... rich... just like in the movies?," InWhan asked suddenly.

"Movies?," Chanhee blinked at him.

"Yep, movies... you know... where they have people clean their house for them and cook food for them and all those things. You know, like a fairy tale where the king lives with his family. Are you rich like those kings?," InWhan asked innocently.

"Erm... I don't know...," Chanhee answered.

JunSu sighed. It was going nowhere. From the way he saw it, ChanHee WAS a rich kid and the funny thing was that the kid didn't even know it.

"Anyways... Chanhee, don't go running away like that without telling me what you are going to do. I don't want anything to happen to you, okay?," JunSu said as he put a hand on Chanhee's shoulder, giving it a light squeeze.

Finally it downed onto Chanhee why the other suddenly asked him that question. InWhan's omma was caring for him too! He was just doing his job as a parent, although he might not be related to them.

ChanHee felt happy somehow. It means something to him to have someone else care for him besides his appa and his family.

It felt so great to have someone else care for him.

"Let's go home now, kids," JunSu stated.

"Yes, omma,"
"Yes, uncle JunSu,"

Both kids replied at the same time. They grinned at each other as they made their way towards JunSu's house happily.

to be continued

Author's note:

Dear lovely readers,

Finally an update! (After such a loooooooooooong time).
Thank you all for being patient with me and enjoying this story too. I'm really sorry for not having updated for quite a while, because my RL has been going crazy and I am sure I am going crazy too at the moment. I have to say that I can't update that fast like other authors, but I am trying to update as soon as possible.

I personally think this chappie sounds like crap, but I do hope you see where I am going with the story.

Please enjoy reading this chappie like all the previous ones.

Thank you for your time ^^



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Jun. 14th, 2009 07:46 pm (UTC)
the plot is going a bit slowly, but it's still good...I'm hoping that Yoosu meet each other and develop feelings soon..hehe..keep it up=)
Jun. 21st, 2009 09:24 pm (UTC)
I know... I am sorry about that :(
I promise to speed up a bit ^^

Thank you for reading and commenting :)
Jun. 14th, 2009 08:03 pm (UTC)
OH!!! UPDATE! *bounces*
Jun. 14th, 2009 08:11 pm (UTC)
That was a bit creepy how the personal driver was described... lol like a stalker or something.
It's good for ChanHee to see that ommas aren't always angels, that way he won't have certain... what's the word, expectations???
I hope that we get to read more YooSu interactions soon, though I think it's strange that Chun would let ChanHee stay over at a friends place without talking to the friend's parent(s)... a bit reckless in my opinion.
Jun. 21st, 2009 09:25 pm (UTC)
Thank you for your lovely comment!

Yep... I hope the YooSu will come soon too, because everytime I want to bring the YooSu together my mind drifts off to something else :P

Chapter 5 is up

Please, enjoy ^^
Jun. 14th, 2009 08:13 pm (UTC)
This story is tooo cute!
Can't wait for another update!
Jun. 21st, 2009 09:25 pm (UTC)
Cuteness is the one thing I love about the yooSu! ^^

Chapter 5 is up!

Thank you for reading and commenting <33
Jun. 14th, 2009 08:21 pm (UTC)
that was good i think always cute cute cute
thx for sharing
Jun. 21st, 2009 09:26 pm (UTC)
Thank you for reading and commenting ^^

Chapter 5 is up

Hope you enjoy it!
Jun. 14th, 2009 10:01 pm (UTC)
i was really waiting for an update on this story. :)
Jun. 21st, 2009 09:27 pm (UTC)
Sorry for the long wait. I hope you'll enjoy the next chappie

Thank you for your comment ^^
Jun. 14th, 2009 10:54 pm (UTC)
i hope chun will at least be gentle with suie soon...
Jun. 21st, 2009 09:27 pm (UTC)
I hope so too, but I think it won't be that early >_>

Thank you for reading and commenting ^^

Chappie 5 is up :)
Jun. 14th, 2009 11:03 pm (UTC)
I've been wanting to read an update so badly!
Chanhee is just too cute. And so is Inhwan.
I want to see more interaction btw Chanhee and Junsu.
It's gonna be really cuuute!!
Jun. 21st, 2009 09:28 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you enjoy reading my ficcu.

Thank you for your comment and thank you for reading.

I love the kids too *huggles them*

I hope to put more YooSu soon too
Jun. 14th, 2009 11:21 pm (UTC)
I enjoyed this chapter, seems like Junsu is going to be a great "mom" to Chanhee, hope yoosu meet soon.
Jun. 21st, 2009 09:29 pm (UTC)
Yup, yup! He's a great mom to InWhan too :D

Thank you for reading and commenting ^^
Jun. 14th, 2009 11:45 pm (UTC)
Aaww, Chanhee is taking a liking to Su. Maybe even labelling him as a candidate for a future omma x3

Haha, InWhan is so cute with the fairytales ^^
Jun. 21st, 2009 09:29 pm (UTC)
Hahaha :D XD

Who knows... he's picked JunSu to be his omma already

Thank you for reading and commenting <33
Jun. 15th, 2009 12:51 am (UTC)
yay...you update...
been waiting for this a long time...
why so cute chanhee ya~~~
and inhwan too...
Jun. 21st, 2009 09:30 pm (UTC)
Sorry for the late reply ;_;

Chappie 5 is up already so you can go read that ^^

And sorry for the long wait

Thank you for your comment
Jun. 15th, 2009 12:55 am (UTC)
yay update!

at least junsu and his kid are forgiving...wanna see how yoosu meets again
Jun. 21st, 2009 09:31 pm (UTC)
JunSu and kids = ♥

Thank you for your comment

Next chappie is up ^^

please enjoy
Jun. 15th, 2009 01:13 am (UTC)
update!!! yay! :) i love your fic and i don't mind when you update...as long as you update! ♥
Jun. 15th, 2009 01:14 am (UTC)
oh! and i also want to say that i love how adorable the children are!!!
Jun. 21st, 2009 09:32 pm (UTC)
Ah... thank you for having patience with me ^^

*huggles you*

Thank you for your comment too. Give me a lot of energy to continue ^^

Chappie 5 is up!
Jun. 22nd, 2009 03:19 am (UTC)
yay! i shall go and read it right after dinner XDDD lol :)
Jun. 15th, 2009 01:56 am (UTC)
They're so cutee and junsu yah is an angel XD
Jun. 21st, 2009 09:32 pm (UTC)
Yup, I agree with you. They are cute!

Thank you for your comment
Jun. 15th, 2009 02:13 am (UTC)
What happens when Junsu find out that Yoochun is Chanhee's father? He's still caring towards him. The kids should soooo set them up for a date and make up for their first meeting.
Jun. 21st, 2009 09:33 pm (UTC)
Well, you just have to wait and see, ne?

Thank you for comenting

Next chapter is up ^^
Jun. 15th, 2009 03:20 am (UTC)
im so late@!!!
Jun. 15th, 2009 04:17 am (UTC)
aww, cute chanhee/inhwan moment
Jun. 21st, 2009 09:34 pm (UTC)
No, you're not. :D

Thank you for commenting ♥
Jun. 15th, 2009 06:18 am (UTC)
awwwww chanhee and inwhan are so cutee
aw junsu is already treating chanhee like his son ^^
Jun. 21st, 2009 09:34 pm (UTC)
Hihihi... JunSu makes a good omma, ne?
Thank you for reading and commenting ^^
Jun. 15th, 2009 09:41 am (UTC)
You update~ *flails*

It's alright.. I understand about RL ^-^
I'm like that too~

Chanhee and Inhwan are so cute!!!

I'll wait for your update ^-^
Jun. 21st, 2009 09:35 pm (UTC)
*flails along*

Thank you for your comment

Thank you for waiting too. Next chappie is up ^^
Jun. 15th, 2009 09:48 am (UTC)
this ish shoooo cute!!!
poor chunhee to suffer from his appa's fault.
*kick yoochun in the butt*

can't wait for the next one!!!
please update soon ^^
Jun. 21st, 2009 09:36 pm (UTC)

Next chappie is up!

Thank you for reading and commenting

Hope you enjoy
Jun. 15th, 2009 01:20 pm (UTC)
Oooh finally an update!! ChanHee is so thoughtful, and I'm glad he apologize for his ignorant Daddy behaviour :)
When when when will the YooSu meet again? ^^
Jun. 21st, 2009 09:36 pm (UTC)
ChanHee is cute, ne?

Yep, he's well-mannered

Thank you for commenting and reading.

Next chapter is up
Jun. 15th, 2009 05:31 pm (UTC)
This fic is very cute! ^-^
I'm looking forward to read more.
Jun. 21st, 2009 09:37 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much ^^

Thank you for your comment

Next chapter is up
Jun. 16th, 2009 06:08 pm (UTC)
never imagine that yoochun acts rude to susu 3.3 *cupped chunnie's cheek*
ahhh!!! wanna see them meet soooonnnnnn XD
but,,it seemed that yoochun had connected to yunho, jaejoong but he doesn't have any relationship to junsu,ne? bwaaaa so it's their 1st meeting then x333
lovely inhwan and channieeeeee *pinch cheek*
love this ff!! please keep continue this ff *showed puppy eyes*
Jun. 21st, 2009 09:37 pm (UTC)
Thank you for your long comment :D

Hope you'll enjoy the next chapter too ^^
Jun. 21st, 2009 09:31 am (UTC)
aaaawww...the kids are relly cute.
Jun. 21st, 2009 09:38 pm (UTC)
Thank you for your comment

Yup, they sure are.

Cuteness overrules the world MUAHAHAHAH :p LOLZ


next chapter is up :)
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